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My Heart is for the taking

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You say my heart is yours
but how will you open the door
to the very door I no longer have the key for
nor feel anymore?
Will you try to breakthrough?
to my very core
but what will that do?
Are you brave enough for an
invasion into my heart?
be prepared I will try to
tear you apart
I really am not trying to
be mean
Like I sad these voices
inside of me
try to control me
I will say this out of my free will
my heart is for the taking
Are you brave enough to open the door
to my very core
© 2013 - 2024 LustfulDevil
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jazmin2hip's avatar
(Opinion Start) (You don't have to take any advice, it's just the way I think) This is really great but to make it awesome try making it a bit more passionate and personal. I always like this kind of "from the heart" writing but personally if we take descriptive words and add them they can make it or break it. Also they can pinpoint your emotions for your readers. (Opinion end)